Haiku Sea

Boat prows bobbing rhythm

fisherman meshing a net ~

sisters hair flowing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 10:54 AM
lovely imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx
Newman Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Thanks Jan. Appreciated. miken
Meade Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 10:45 AM
This is interesting -- I would never have connected the boats and nets to flowing hair -- but it works. Nicely done
Newman Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Thanks for perceptive reply david . Miken
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