Haiku Sbi

sky is charcoal black birds return from cloud to nest I sing life’s rain song August 8, 2018 Syllable count : 5-7-5 (Checked on howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 9/19/2018 12:42:00 PM

What lovely lines submimal, many congratulations on your win ;:-) Hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/20/2018 4:16:00 AM

Thank you, Jan.

Date: 9/17/2018 9:38:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your win with your lovely haiku!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/19/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mark.

Date: 9/17/2018 8:29:00 PM

Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/19/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Date: 9/17/2018 7:57:00 PM

Great Haiku,Subimal, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/19/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Date: 8/8/2018 10:42:00 PM

The beauty of your splendid haiku is breathtaking, Subimal. I love your last line.. superb! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/9/2018 3:11:00 AM

Thank you Susan, for your visit, and for your encouraging comments.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/9/2018 3:11:00 AM

Thank you Susan, for your visit, and for your encouraging comments.