Haiku Sbi

sky is charcoal black birds return from cloud to nest I sing life’s rain song
August 8, 2018 Syllable count : 5-7-5 (Checked on howmanysyllables.com)
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Allison Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 12:42 PM
What lovely lines submimal, many congratulations on your win ;:-) Hugs Jan xx
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September 20, 2018 at 4:16 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Toney Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win with your lovely haiku!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Thank you so much, Mark.
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
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September 19, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Thank you, Line.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Great Haiku,Subimal, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Ashley Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 10:42 PM
The beauty of your splendid haiku is breathtaking, Subimal. I love your last line.. superb! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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August 9, 2018 at 3:11 AM
Thank you Susan, for your visit, and for your encouraging comments.
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August 9, 2018 at 3:11 AM
Thank you Susan, for your visit, and for your encouraging comments.
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