Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

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___hello kitty___

pretty and stylish
clean sassy paw print shower
purr-fect flower smell
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__sea of stupidity___

life without reason
beauty vanished common sense
follow the leader
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___city dreams___

low rise grey sunrise 
dusty wind music terror
crystal clear sunset.
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___brain storming___

business in the sky
thirst engraved in my sand wall
wishing well compel
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___live bait___

catch me if you can
deep under salty water
aquatic spew smell
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___turtle wax___

twisted fresh smell
beautiful shine in the sun
clear crystal rain X
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___lonely and apart___

an empty kettle
fall like a flower petal
wet window ledge
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___ Margarita Time__

stainless creation
blizzard form from tornado
cold temptations
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___ withdrawals ___

clouds hide down below
my heart, my body, my soul
a certain form lost
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by;p.d.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:03 PM haiku who **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2012 at 9:08 PM good grief, what a pain trying to catch up. well, I think I put in enough time now. I AM caught up. But I really wish I could see more. However, I want even more to go watch the VOICE. See ya later, Alligator.

Debbie Duncan September 7, 2011 at 2:45 AM I like very much ;}thanks for your comment on "YOU" !

Kyle Kriticos May 29, 2011 at 3:54 PM I really enjoyed that. I like your style poet destroyer just please dont destroy me lol

Gwendolen Song May 21, 2011 at 5:40 PM Nice conglomeration of haikus and senryus....the Martguerita lines were cool and refreshing...I really like the empty kettle fall like a flower petal-wet window ledge! This is an extraordinary haiku....You are so diverse in your writing, POET DESTROYER. Care to share how u came up with this super hero writer's name? ...I want a name like yours too! Make up one for me. ha ha

Daver Austin May 18, 2011 at 2:41 PM Where to begin? There is a considerable flow of nature in these poems. They have a definite humidity to them, like you are observing from some close point, and experiencing with your whole body. I'm just carrying on. will have to read these again. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 16, 2011 at 4:53 AM Fee Fi Fo Fum! I smell the blood of a Texan (eating corn tortillas and not sharing with me!!) oh boohoo!! give it! Grr, grrr, I am mean when I am hungry-- lol :) haha! well enjoy yuor day pzzztop :D

Desiree M May 11, 2011 at 9:14 PM These haikus are all great. I have a preference for this one : ___city dreams___ low rise grey sunrise dusty wind music terror crystal clear sunset.

Mitch White May 7, 2011 at 8:24 AM Your effort has not been thwarted. For ye last three poems aer telling me to call/?

Michael J. Falotico May 5, 2011 at 2:07 PM I Love your Haikus Pd, your have a way of writing that holds and grabs me in ways i can't mention... great poetry my dear... luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2011 at 7:48 PM PD. these are very good hiaku from you. VEry thoughtful! I loved reading them.

James Peranteau May 4, 2011 at 7:47 AM Just love the way you have your thoughts splurging on slip hear dear poet ! Love it ! Have a great day...much love, james

Debbie Guzzi May 3, 2011 at 5:35 PM Can't write in your blog the Bio section covers the letter typie place so can't see all the letters :( so here's what I wanted to say! [I think you should rename YOU how about a contest for a new name for YOU I vote Heartrust!or Gaiaverse! Light & Love]

Sarah Seraphin May 3, 2011 at 10:55 AM * Ow * i love the kitties stanzas scene * sooo beautiful and lovely its * “Sweeetened Thoughts” * Not only are “You Beautiful Beyond Compare” * but sooo extremely blessed and gifted within * “Poetics Perfect Artful * Reflections of You” * and i find it sooo very hard to believe that a lady as laced in sheer perfumed talent * could ever lose her muse or * “The Brilliance of Beauties Diamond Glow” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * smiles * and beautiful love * always * sarah

Sara Kendrick May 3, 2011 at 9:33 AM Very creative works..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Cory Long May 3, 2011 at 8:20 AM thank you so much for the re assuring feeling of knowing my limerick is right. I have never written one and I am trying out new forms.. Have a great day I am still trying to figure out something for your contest sly fox.. don't worry i will come up with something LOL.. cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 3, 2011 at 7:58 AM Everyone SUPER P.D. my BFF and everyone a treat to read but Hello Kitty and sea of stupidity are my favs luv.. well I luv them all.. well u are just the BEST ... and to see u on top again warms my soul ... to a smoldering fire luv.. appreciate your sweet critique of my entry for Paula... her contests are so challenging.. got an HM last one.. hope for more this one.. dreams come true all the time luv.. dream BIG ...and LOUD ... luv.. your BFF forever for life.... and beyond...too..

Jack Horne May 3, 2011 at 7:46 AM A lovely selection of haiku here, PD : )

Tahera Mannan May 3, 2011 at 6:59 AM Hi pd some awesome strings og haiku here. Loved the kitty one as much as the clouds. I am so glad you are back. Love your comments on my work. I missed you.

Anne Rutherford May 3, 2011 at 6:42 AM D. you are a master at haiku poems ,like my poet friend Juan ,he was so good at it too.last one is special and my favourite . Anne

Poet Destroyer A May 3, 2011 at 6:29 AM yes D.G. I used title,, cause I wanted to give the readers an idea.. lol.. cheating for them you would say... thanks by the way.. I kind of knew it was free verse... love ya..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi May 3, 2011 at 5:56 AM haiku do not use metaphor or simile or personification, what you have above is a whole bunch of VERY creative FREE VERSE. Let me know if you want to try again? Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi May 3, 2011 at 5:53 AM Wow PD, you asked for correction but wow, hold on to your hat #1 verse [and all below it haiku do not have titles, why? well partly because they are supposed to be open ended /on both ends, the beginning and the end/ so the next person can add a haiku before or after it] seems to be about a cat [mostly I'm guessing because of your title which is cheating ;)] haiku must have 2 parts this seems to be only one, haiku must have a seasonal refferance this has none #2 verse same problems as verse

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 2, 2011 at 11:58 PM @misty mourning, I checked out the link you put in here-- this Chris/Christopher Fox Graham (Fox the Poet) is totally a different person from pd? I don't think pd was trying to offend you at all--her contest was just inspired by the inner animal blog that I posted a while back-- please don't think that anybody is offending you. I am sorry that you had undergone so much hurt from the past, but rest assured that pd isn't trying to hurt you or anybody

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 2, 2011 at 11:57 PM Sure enjoyed reading all your haiku, pd :) I liked a bunch of them-- maybe you will even host a haiku crazy contest soon :)! & hmmm- I think there is some sort of confusion here?

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