Haiku Red

fiery red the leaves shout -- look at me but wind and rain just smile goodbye

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2015 7:51:00 AM

Hi David...been searching around for poems of yours which I have not read...and found this little autumn beauty! #7 // paul

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/13/2015 9:58:00 AM

Ooh nice. Great imagery here David. *S* Cynthia

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/10/2015 3:56:00 AM

imagery as perfect as your words!!!! digesting it with smiles!a7...olive eloisa

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/19/2014 9:34:00 PM

WOW! You are so very gifted! Awesome imagery as usual - just so beautifully written! Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/18/2014 12:14:00 AM

poor fiery red leaves..wind and rain are heartless. they will come back next season. extremely good haiku of nature. a regular nature poet. love take care ....RAJAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2014 7:01:00 AM

Very descriptive of the autumn time of year..Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/24/2014 4:06:00 PM

A beautiful summary.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2014 3:45:00 AM

delightful haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx