Haiku Red

fiery red the leaves
shout -- look at me but wind and
rain just smile goodbye
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Callus Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Hi David...been searching around for poems of yours which I have not read...and found this little autumn beauty! #7 // paul
Jones Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Ooh nice. Great imagery here David. *S* Cynthia
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:56 AM
imagery as perfect as your words!!!! digesting it with smiles!a7...olive eloisa
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 9:34 PM
WOW! You are so very gifted! Awesome imagery as usual - just so beautifully written! Pandita
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:14 AM
poor fiery red leaves..wind and rain are heartless. they will come back next season. extremely good haiku of nature. a regular nature poet. love take care ....RAJAT
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Very descriptive of the autumn time of year..Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Kiser Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 4:06 PM
A beautiful summary.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 3:45 AM
delightful haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
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