Haiku: Rabbit

in meadows, they dwell secretly nibbles green leaves magical creatures. by Zyrool

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2024 3:50:00 AM

They are interesting little furry creatures and their presence have helped many poor families keep from starving to death. My father said when he was a boy, he could throw a rock and kill one or two then they would have rabbit stew for that night. When there are 8 boys and 3 girls, a mother, father, an aunt and uncle to feed it was not easy seeing that there was enough food in the house. Nice Haiku. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/31/2024 1:34:00 AM

Hi Sara, thank you for the read and for sharing such a touching story. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the week, my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/22/2024 2:47:00 PM

Rabbits and Jack ranbits, I have them all over my yard. Thank you for your praise of these magical creatures.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/23/2024 12:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for dropping by. I so envy you having them at your doorstep. Have a wonderful new week my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2024 3:17:00 PM

Fun to sight a rabbit. You remember when your visiting someone or on vacation. Are they put there for our entertainment. I think so.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/23/2024 12:23:00 AM

Hi Kim thanks for the read. I think you're right, they do add a bit of magic. Have a great rest of the week.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/19/2024 2:46:00 PM

Hello Zyrool, Rabbits are beautiful. I like them. I have seen them come into grdens and eat some sort of a plant. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2024 10:04:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, Oh, I also have squirrels as well as rabbits and birds. Hugs. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/23/2024 12:29:00 AM

Hi Darlene you are so lucky to have such beautiful company. In my garden I see foxes and squirrels. Have a wonderful rest of the week my friend. Stay Blessed.