Haiku Poem 4

a walk in the park
butterfly on pink flowers
locusts buzz loudly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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April 4, 2018 at 3:20 AM
An ode to love that means something.
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April 4, 2018 at 3:17 AM
This poem ran wild, and fast, I could barely keep up with it. I'm going to read it again; because it is worth it!
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April 4, 2018 at 3:13 AM
Dear Deborah, the imagery is impeccable. Well written, and well poemed!
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April 4, 2018 at 3:10 AM
This is poetic, I have no other word to describe such a fantastic read.
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April 4, 2018 at 3:03 AM
What a great idea you followed through with and NAILED! Wow!
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April 4, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Well fed, lovely pets, nice warm casket. Everything I've ever wanted! I am there.
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April 4, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Oh, Tom, I so wish this was true! I can picture it, and I want it but it's cold enough to snow here.
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