Haiku Or Senryu

haiku or senryu 
doesn't matter I'm still
alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:34 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Susan. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Rozario Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Oh wow this is such a strong write...I hope you don't have to stay like this for long...congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Susan. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 3:38 AM
cheers to you for this fine win, susan.. :) hugggs!
Williams Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 2:30 AM
Susan congrats on your win..David
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 12:03 AM
Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!
May Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 7:20 PM
very nice Susan...congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:23 PM
Love this one, Susan. I didn't quite know what I was doing for this contest but you captured what she was wanting! Congrats to you.
A   Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 6:11 PM
SUSAN, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD
May Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 7:55 AM
nice write Susan..thanks for stopping by..hugs...Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 6:49 PM
wow, DEEP one, Susan . How did I miss this?
Minardi Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 9:02 AM
A loadful of sadness, Susan. My 'Birthday Suit' poem wasn't based on the true person. Sorry for the late reply, dear Susan. :)
Collins Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Wow. Hits hard. love, Kathy
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 3:01 PM
One more friend - well done - oxox Anne-Lise
Sivey Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 6:01 PM
We're here for you Susan! This is a perfect Senryu that you have written! I love this write tons! This is an amazing poem I have to say, especially the last line, excellent! Great Work!!
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May 22, 2012 at 12:31 PM
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