Haiku Ophidia

Sleeping coil of snake
slithered as my shadow fell -
rope slipped the bollard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Never a good thing when the tie slips the bollard . . . great imagery, great haiku.
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November 13, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Thanks David Appreciated Miken
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