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Haiku On Probabilities

Frog leaps into pond Ripples warp serene thoughts Reflection of me Based on a traditional eastern Format of 5/7/5 syllables , 3 lines

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Date: 8/11/2014 8:31:00 AM
Brilliant haiku Sam! Congrats on fine win!
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Sam Raj
Date: 8/11/2014 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Upmaji, For these kind words. I love the challenge of Haiku. TC :-)
Date: 8/9/2014 4:19:00 PM
Excellent imagery and thought, Sam. Lovely and charming haiku. congrats & well done. // paul
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Date: 8/11/2014 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I love the challenge of Haiku. TC :-)
Date: 8/9/2014 11:14:00 AM
Sam, good Haiku. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:49:00 AM
Hi Mohan, Thanks for the complements. Keep in touch. TC :-)
Date: 8/8/2014 10:16:00 PM
Fantastic thought, well worded, Sam Raj. congrats. Namaste
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:47:00 AM
Namaste Dr. Ramji, Thanks for the complements. TC :-)
Date: 8/8/2014 8:13:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! Congratulations on a fine win!
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:45:00 AM
Hi Pandita, Long time? Thanks for the complements. TC :-)
Date: 8/8/2014 8:12:00 PM
hey , this is pretty cool. Glad I got to see it.
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:42:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thanks for dropping by. TC :-)
Date: 8/8/2014 6:54:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:40:00 AM
Hi Jan, Thanks for judging that it's a good write. Your judgement did not fail. That's what I call a poetic expression. TC :-)
Date: 7/19/2014 11:53:00 AM
Great Haiku good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2014 12:28:00 PM
Thanks jan, Love this type . But hv been mostly in Tankas. Gives me more room. Thanks for your support.

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