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Haiku On Probabilities

Frog leaps into pond
Ripples warp serene thoughts
Reflection of me






Based on a traditional eastern 
Format of  5/7/5  syllables , 3 lines

naturehaiku

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 8:31 AM

Brilliant haiku Sam! Congrats on fine win!

Sam Raj

August 11, 2014 at 9:07 AM

Thanks Dr. Upmaji, For these kind words. I love the challenge of Haiku. TC :-)

Paul Callus

August 9, 2014 at 4:19 PM

Excellent imagery and thought, Sam. Lovely and charming haiku. congrats & well done. // paul

Sam Raj

August 11, 2014 at 9:05 AM

Thanks Paul, I love the challenge of Haiku. TC :-)

Mohan Chutani

August 9, 2014 at 11:14 AM

Sam, good Haiku. Congrats. Mohan

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 11:49 AM

Hi Mohan, Thanks for the complements. Keep in touch. TC :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 10:16 PM

Fantastic thought, well worded, Sam Raj. congrats. Namaste

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 11:47 AM

Namaste Dr. Ramji, Thanks for the complements. TC :-)

Pandita Sietesantos

August 8, 2014 at 8:13 PM

Beautiful imagery! Congratulations on a fine win!

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 11:45 AM

Hi Pandita, Long time? Thanks for the complements. TC :-)

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 8:12 PM

hey , this is pretty cool. Glad I got to see it.

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 11:42 AM

Hi Andrea, Thanks for dropping by. TC :-)

Jan Allison

August 8, 2014 at 6:54 PM

dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 11:40 AM

Hi Jan, Thanks for judging that it's a good write. Your judgement did not fail. That's what I call a poetic expression. TC :-)

Jan Allison

July 19, 2014 at 11:53 AM

Great Haiku good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx

Sam Raj

July 19, 2014 at 12:28 PM

Thanks jan, Love this type . But hv been mostly in Tankas. Gives me more room. Thanks for your support.

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