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Haiku On My Death

Watch! Watch! My debacle into flames That consumed dusk! -Pin Dew (04/05/2017) Note: Experimental Haiku- The meters are not according to rules.

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Date: 6/18/2017 3:46:00 PM
Love a haiku :)
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Date: 7/3/2017 1:04:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 5/14/2017 3:48:00 AM
This is wonderful Pin! I prefer this kind to the traditional 5-7-5 haiku. You last line is simply brilliant! : ) 7
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Date: 6/1/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much!! :)