Haiku On My Death

Watch! Watch!
My debacle into flames
That consumed dusk!

-Pin Dew (04/05/2017)

Note: Experimental Haiku- The meters are not according to rules.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Duncan Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Love a haiku :)
Dew Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Thanks :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 3:48 AM
This is wonderful Pin! I prefer this kind to the traditional 5-7-5 haiku. You last line is simply brilliant! : ) 7
Dew Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Thank you so much!! :)
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