Haiku Number Sixteen

"Mmmmmmm"  Lilac nectar
Flying high -  designer winged
Madame butterfly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 31, 2009 at 8:38 PM
Butterflys are beautiful creatures, great job dipicting one...Raul
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January 30, 2009 at 5:35 PM
I love the flow and magic in this write! Laura :)
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January 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM
The form here is as perfect as the imagery itself. Simply beautiful! Michael
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January 29, 2009 at 4:58 PM
This poem has me smiling. Nice use of this concise form. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day. Karen
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