Haiku Number Six Re Post

The fox cub trembled
The scent hound licking his lips
Winter sun sparkled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 13, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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June 12, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
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June 9, 2010 at 11:36 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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June 7, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Deirdre. Love, Carol
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June 6, 2010 at 2:43 PM
Nice last line to conclude your poem. Interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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January 16, 2009 at 5:00 AM
Terrific imagery. It seems you have the ability to make everything seem so vivid and real. Excellent flow and a perfect write. Michael
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January 15, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Great use of imagery, I can picture the hound licking her lips as the cub trembles with fear...Raul
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January 14, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Great work, I enjoyed it.
Kelly Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Tally-Ho !!! No.6 .....
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