Haiku Number Seven

You will be my light
When the winter night burns out
With the glowing log
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 26, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Love, Carol
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May 14, 2009 at 7:51 PM
This is such a wonderful haiku. I can see the imagery quite clearly. Don't forget the chocolate and marsh mellows too. If you would like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, including haiku poems, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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February 12, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Sound like a nice peaceful setting. Nice use of this concise form. Keep on writing! Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Karen
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 2:46 PM
You are your own light. Original Chi. Light & Love debbie Guzzi
Degenhardt Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 5:01 AM
A bit of romance in this haiku. The form is perfect as is the imagery within. Michael
Moreno Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 5:28 PM
Nice warm haiku, touching words...Raul
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January 14, 2009 at 11:31 PM
I can relate with this one Deirdre.
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January 14, 2009 at 2:49 PM
Inspirational... love still glows, even in the absence of light and heat. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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January 14, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Nice haiku.....sweet wording...Maryam
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