Haiku Number Nine/Limerick Re Post
Elderberry wine
It's a knockout, first time round
Boxing time again
From Ireland, Deirdre's now calling
She wrote a Haiku that's appalling
If only she'd waited, with words reinstated
Her Haiku might now be enthralling
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