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Haiku Number Five

The plump hen grunted
Having popped her morning free range
No egg on her face

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 19, 2010 at 3:17 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Love, Carol

April 18, 2010 at 3:17 PM

Got a chuckle out of reading this again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep the poetry coming. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Ernilando Tugaff

March 18, 2009 at 1:34 PM

Deirdre, give me high five for this. You are mastering the Haiku form. Ernilando

January 18, 2009 at 12:57 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for this day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Degenhardt

January 16, 2009 at 4:59 AM

The read brought a smile to my face with the subtle humor. The form is off a bit but does not take away from the enjoyment of the read. An excellent write. Michael