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Haiku Number Five

The plump hen grunted Having popped her morning free range No egg on her face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/19/2010 3:17:00 AM
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Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deirdre. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 3:17:00 PM
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Got a chuckle out of reading this again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep the poetry coming. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Ernilando Tugaff
Date: 3/18/2009 1:34:00 PM
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Deirdre, give me high five for this. You are mastering the Haiku form. Ernilando
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Date: 1/18/2009 12:57:00 PM
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Got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for this day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen
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Michael Degenhardt
Date: 1/16/2009 4:59:00 AM
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The read brought a smile to my face with the subtle humor. The form is off a bit but does not take away from the enjoyment of the read. An excellent write. Michael
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Raul Moreno
Date: 1/15/2009 5:34:00 PM
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Nice one here, this is an egg-quisite haiku...Raul
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Danielle Moreno
Date: 1/15/2009 5:30:00 PM
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cool work i do haikus to..................danielle
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/15/2009 6:08:00 AM
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Very clever Deidre! ...cute final line!! Best wishes, Keith
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Sean Kelly
Date: 1/13/2009 12:43:00 AM
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Well presented , Deirdre . I see you've got your " sunny-side-up " ... Roll on no.6 ....
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Steve Edmonds
Date: 1/12/2009 4:27:00 PM
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Nice haiku, I invite you to read some of mine...Caremel
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