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Haiku Number Eleven

Golden flowers of Spring Goddess scented daffodils Beckoning the dawn

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Date: 3/15/2009 8:34:00 AM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration in this concise poem. I can't wait for spring. We've had so much snow this winter. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/31/2009 8:34:00 PM

The imagery is great in this one, off to the next...Raul

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/26/2009 12:38:00 PM

Such wonderful and clear beautiful imagery. Love the flow of this read as well. Michael

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/25/2009 12:43:00 PM

Mmmmmm successful recount , I see ....