Haiku Number Eighteen

Note:
Bing! I didn't forget the last word



Red Orange yellow
Green Blue Violet spectrum
Somewhere over the
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Degenhardt Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 6:09 AM
Makes us all say the word out loud when we get to the last line. Very clever! Michael
Moreno Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 4:19 PM
Nice poem Deirdre, you're on fire with your haiku's...Raul
Edmonds Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Pretty self-explanitory and great by the way. My favorite form.
Ehigiator Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Very lovely and creative, Nicely done..God Bless*Tyesha
Kelly Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Lets go .... rainbow .... ooops , sorry , you don't like footles , Deirdre ..... Sorry again , this really is a very clever presentation , so well done " Judy "............ Rgds. " Scarecrow "....
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