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Deirdre Omaidin

Haiku Number Eight

Blackberry picking
Purple black juice of autumn
A thorn prick - SUGAR

Copyright © Deirdre Omaidin | Year Posted 2009

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Poet Destroyer A

September 18, 2010 at 5:34 PM

Hello, Deirdre here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 13, 2010 at 12:38 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Deirdre. Love, Carol

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 22, 2009 at 5:18 AM

Ah! ...the joys of fruit picking in the Fall! Crisp days, chilly winds and hot cider... yummm! Well done Deirdre! Best wishes, Keith

Michael Degenhardt

January 16, 2009 at 5:02 AM

Autumn, oh how I'd love autumn instead of frigid winter. Terrific write, the form is dead on while the imagery takes me back to autumn. Michael

January 15, 2009 at 5:40 PM

Wonderfuly Haiku!!! I love your excellent imagery! Laura :)

Danielle Moreno

January 15, 2009 at 5:29 PM

good work that is really good

January 15, 2009 at 5:27 PM

Nice work Deirdre, I love your work...Raul

January 15, 2009 at 5:00 PM

You've got me smiling with this poem. Nice use of this short format. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

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