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Haiku Number 19

Winter snow deepens Harbinger of Springtime nods Snowdrops, more snow drops

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Brian Strand

Date: 2/5/2009 12:12:00 AM

It has indeed here in England this week Deirdre.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/4/2009 3:16:00 AM

Nice # 19 Deirdre, the snow seems to deepen, but brings beauty with it. Gread job...Raul

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/3/2009 1:11:00 PM

Very pretty Deirdre! I love haikus and this one is very delicate and beautiful. Thank you :) for the caring comments you left on my poetry about my mom. Blessings to you friend, Amy :)

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/3/2009 6:10:00 AM

The form is great and well adhered to\. The fact that snow keeps on coming, well that can be depressing so we hold out for spring. Terrific read. Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/3/2009 2:56:00 AM

I knew I'd love this one, as 19 is my favorite number, excellent, love the double meaning, and the repitition adds to the haiku, love, Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/2/2009 11:25:00 PM

Great haiku , Deirdre ... Excellent last line ; how appropriate , right now !!! ...