Haiku- Morning Sun

Morning sun brings warmth to cold faces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:31 AM
Sure love the sun, Diana. I have decided to read ALL your haiku since I am a haiku nut.
Henderson Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 9:55 PM
morning sun// shines warmth into faces --// cold eyes You can have this one if you like.
Rosser Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 1:49 AM
Thank you for this suggestion, I changed it using your idea of cold, but I was trying to say something slightly different from your idea, but thank you for writing a comment and proposing a different idea.
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Cute!!!
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