Haiku Moon

Dark moon on the rise
Silver black ocean and skies
How you hypnotize



©Danielle White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 2, 2009 at 1:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Carolyn's contest Danielle.Will be upholding you in prayer concerning your blog today.Rgds Brian
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November 29, 2009 at 1:19 PM
Lovely haiku, Danielle! Best of luck in Raul's contest. (You do plan to enter it, don't you?) Hugs, Donna
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November 29, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Good write and describes it well, enjoyed...Thanks on the Road Runner...I agree with what you say on the poems we now are reading...they make so sense, then why write them...I am a few past a few years past a young man, but thanks..I am a old cowboy that like to write...a story teller...stories put into verse...sort of look like a poem...hope you like them..thanks Danny
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November 29, 2009 at 9:04 AM
This is a hypnotic haiku, Danielle.......loved it!! ~ Love, Carrie
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November 29, 2009 at 6:29 AM
Dear Danielle, A Winner!! I like the way YOU rhymed this Exquisite Haiku I wish YOU Good Luck but I don't think YOU need it See YOU in the Winner's Circle YOUR Liege...HG Soup Mail Call
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