Haiku - Maybe

5-7-5 
What is a Haiku
Unless to smack you
Straight in the mouth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:36 AM
I think you actually made a haiku here, not 5-7-5, but better.
Keady Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Ahh, thanks so much... Praise indeed as I am still trying to work it out..! That is, what is a Haiku... as the more you read, the more so many different rules apply..
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