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Haiku Marsh

Out of the vast marsh
plaintive grey curlew calling -
my sister scolding me.

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

November 22, 2014 at 10:58 PM

Haiku Marsh a good tamash(humor)Thanks for sharing.regards.-Safa

Michael Newman

November 23, 2014 at 3:59 AM

Thank you Muhammad For your time and comment .Appreciated. Miken

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 13, 2014 at 3:17 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Michael - I choose your first great Haiku - I love Haiku - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Newman

November 23, 2014 at 4:01 AM

Thanks so much .Miken