Haiku Love

the cloud, pink from the setting sun, floats on the breeze your love lingering

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Daver Austin

Date: 8/9/2016 12:32:00 PM

Perfect, David. You should send it to haiku journal - easy...haikujournal.com. Love, daver

Tom Arnone

Date: 8/8/2016 8:35:00 AM

Colorful, touching, memorable haiku. :-)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 7/18/2015 7:20:00 PM

Soft and tender and true. I love the ending.

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/15/2015 8:43:00 AM

OOOH Nice!!!!! Fantastic Haiku you have yourself here David. *S* Cynthia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2014 7:00:00 AM

That pink cloud was captivating..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2014 12:07:00 AM

This one is my favorite so far. The way you do your haiku, I think they would look nice as monoku, since the lines are not divided!

David Meade
Date: 10/29/2014 9:03:00 PM

Thanks for the idea of a monoku -- though I must confess I had to look it up. I will need to try one . . .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/25/2014 11:45:00 AM

- David, beautiful Haiku - // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade
Date: 10/25/2014 12:20:00 PM

You are kind . . . thank-you for reading my lines, it give me encouragement.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2014 11:10:00 AM

oh what a romantic haiku,great imagery:-) hugs jan xxx

David Meade
Date: 10/25/2014 12:22:00 PM

Thank-you Jan, the love that lingers when one leaves always gives me pause. All the best new friend.