Haiku Love

the cloud, pink from the
setting sun, floats on the breeze
your love lingering
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Austin Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Perfect, David. You should send it to haiku journal - easy...haikujournal.com. Love, daver
Arnone Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 8:35 AM
Colorful, touching, memorable haiku. :-)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Soft and tender and true. I love the ending.
Jones Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:43 AM
OOOH Nice!!!!! Fantastic Haiku you have yourself here David. *S* Cynthia
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:00 AM
That pink cloud was captivating..Enjoyed reading..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 12:07 AM
This one is my favorite so far. The way you do your haiku, I think they would look nice as monoku, since the lines are not divided!
Meade Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Thanks for the idea of a monoku -- though I must confess I had to look it up. I will need to try one . . .
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 11:45 AM
- David, beautiful Haiku - // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 12:20 PM
You are kind . . . thank-you for reading my lines, it give me encouragement.
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 11:10 AM
oh what a romantic haiku,great imagery:-) hugs jan xxx
Meade Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Thank-you Jan, the love that lingers when one leaves always gives me pause. All the best new friend.
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