Haiku - Last Hurrah

last hurrah
for the school of fish
a bowl for two


04.19.18

1st place
"Fish" themed
hosted by M. Talbot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:09 AM
this is awesome. and I see you got top spot. BIG congrats.
Flower Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 9:06 PM
Thank you and congrats as well, Andrea. :)
Callus Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Very creative, Moon Flower:) Congratulations on your top placement!! Regards // paul
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Thank you, Paul. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 8:45 AM
OH THAT'S GOOD! Congratulations on gold! :) xomo!
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Thank you, Maureen. :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 9:52 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Moon Flower.
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:23 AM
Thank you, Line. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 1:56 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:24 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:25 AM
Thank you, Susan. :)
Pett Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Moon flower with your excellent haiku. :))
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:25 AM
Thank you, Roy. :)
Talbot Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your gold medal win Moon Flower! Aw, a bowl for 2, hope it was a big bowl LOL... Mick
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:32 AM
We can have the big one then. =) Thank you for the awesome placement by the way...
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:27 PM
- Hurrah ... great one, Moon Flower :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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