Haiku Lace

Plumed egrets shuffling

dripping white laced reflections ~

of the Lace maker.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 3, 2015 at 9:29 AM
An easy seven, Michael. This morning, I have been enjoying many of your Haiku. Thanks for sharing. I remember seeing an egret in Florida with flowing lacy tail feathers. My poem was titled "Casual Egret."
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January 3, 2015 at 9:47 AM
very encouraging comment , thanks for reading more than one! this little cameo was from spain originally, Mike
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November 22, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Nicely done! the last line is classic, I can't wait to see another Egret so I can check out it's hands!! All the best.
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November 26, 2014 at 12:49 PM
As I said to Maurice I was not happy with that ,have re written the last line. Appreciate your feed back Miken
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November 23, 2014 at 3:14 PM
Oops was that over laced ! miken thanks
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