Haiku In Troika

Snow Queen's galloping
three headed icy-cold sleigh,
        a troika blizzard


Date : 12/15/2016

Note : For the contest (The Troika - Haiku With Hooves) by John Lawless.
          *Placed Fifth*
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Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Very well done Afzal, congratulations...
Nusker Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Thank you, Charlie
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 12:30 PM
Very good Haiku, Afzal, congratulations on your win
Nusker Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
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January 14, 2017 at 6:14 PM
A grand cold visual! Congrats, Afzal!
Nusker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Thank you, Kim.
May Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Congrats on a fine win Afzal
Nusker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
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January 14, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Congrats on your win, Afzal.
Nusker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Lawless Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 1:22 PM
WHAT A VISUAL......great job Afzal, thanks for entering the contest
Nusker Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 10:20 PM
Thank you so very much for putting me in the winner's list, John.
Callus Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 4:17 PM
I love the image which you have projected, Afzal; but I would not want to be caught in an icy cold blizzard!! Regards // paul
Nusker Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Thank you very much Paul for the lovely comment and even I wouldn't want to be caught in a blizzard.
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January 5, 2017 at 12:21 AM
It has hooves and it moves. Looks like a winner. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Janis.
Nusker Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Thank you so much, Janis.
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:48 PM
A 7 for your lively three-liner, Afzal! Happy New Year. Janice
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January 3, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Thank you very much, Janice and a very 'HAPPY NEW YEAR' to you as well.
Y. Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Hi Afzal, This is just beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones:-) Alexis
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December 25, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis for reading my poems and Happy Holidays to you & your loved ones as well.
May Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Very nice haiku Afzal....Gl in the contest
Nusker Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Meade Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Great imagery -- it engaged my senses. loved it.
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December 20, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thank you very much, David.
Roper Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 11:37 PM
This is wonderful,Afzal :-) good luck in the contest. Merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
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December 19, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Thank you very much, Eve and Happy Holidays to you as well.
Dutta Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Beautiful. Wish you best
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December 19, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Thank you, Anisha
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:34 PM
oh this is simply SPLENDID, my friend!
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December 16, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Nice work Nafzal, thanks for your visits...
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December 16, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Thank you, Charlie.
Daniel Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 12:36 AM
Sounds very fierce:) well written, Afzal:)
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December 16, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you, Jo.
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