Haiku Hobble

On white washed cobble

a cricket creeping along ~

old man stooped and bent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:30 PM
I drive my daughter nuts when I stop and look at bark on the tree . . . God's nature has so many surprises . . . great haiku
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November 17, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Thanks,and diversity to exceed our poetry ! Miken
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November 17, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Hi Mr. Newman, Very solid haiku with a strong structure and cute picture. Enjoyable read. Have a great day. Earl
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November 17, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Earl. your comment is very valuable to me. new to the poetry soup group. Appreciated Miken
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