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Haiku: Hiccups

Hiccup irritates Ribcage hurting critically Many times a day

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/8/2011 11:41:00 AM

So true Barbara....

Barbara Washington

Date: 4/27/2011 10:35:00 PM

@mourningmist I realize what rape you are referring to. Just as painful I can imagine

Barbara Washington

Date: 4/27/2011 10:29:00 PM

@mourningmist I know hiccups don't compare to rape, but hiccups can be mighty annoying. lol Sorry this happen to you, but poetry comment is not the appropriate place to express such a tragic moment. Hope there was justice for you though it won't take away the memory of a tragic moment.

Mourning Mist

Date: 4/27/2011 9:29:00 PM

sending the same type of poems to the different women..a lying lecher without a thought to what he rapes with his lying little hurtful mouth, the worse frigging hurt I ever had to endure my whole life was with that man, the humiliation he gave me publically, the lying, never met such an ass my entire life,,then now no knowledge i was merely a puppet waiting around? be glad you only have hiccups

Mourning Mist

Date: 4/27/2011 9:27:00 PM

i can stand before God and let him know, as he already does this was the most painful, humiliating and hurting man I ever met my whole life..a real frigging trip and treat..

Mourning Mist

Date: 4/27/2011 9:26:00 PM

followed me around and stuck to my very ass pumping words into my soul but i was only bits of light and no knowledge..a lying lecher that leads others on..most critical amount of hurt i have had to endure my whole frigging life..good for you that you only have hiccups..while the others pick up the scraps of what remains

Mourning Mist

Date: 4/27/2011 9:24:00 PM

count yourself fortunate only hiccups, i was lead on for nine months by a lecher i thought wanted knowledge nothing but a lying lecher that leads others on, only wanted a bit of light, while writing words they never met..stuck to my ass and suck the life right out of me, be glad for hiccups only

Mourning Mist

Date: 4/27/2011 9:14:00 PM

for me the most critical hurt i ever endured my whole life, i can say this to God himself was last july and for the last nine months, count yourself lucky you only have hiccups..most painful and critically hurt thing i have had..knowledge never wanted, but sucked the life right out of me,literally

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2011 9:10:00 PM

Barbara, yes they do.. annoying nevertheless..Enjoyed your haiku ;-) :-)take care..p.d.