Haiku: Hiccups

Hiccup irritates
Ribcage hurting critically
Many times a day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 8, 2011 at 11:41 AM
So true Barbara....
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April 27, 2011 at 10:35 PM
@mourningmist I realize what rape you are referring to. Just as painful I can imagine
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April 27, 2011 at 10:29 PM
@mourningmist I know hiccups don't compare to rape, but hiccups can be mighty annoying. lol Sorry this happen to you, but poetry comment is not the appropriate place to express such a tragic moment. Hope there was justice for you though it won't take away the memory of a tragic moment.
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April 27, 2011 at 9:29 PM
sending the same type of poems to the different women..a lying lecher without a thought to what he rapes with his lying little hurtful mouth, the worse frigging hurt I ever had to endure my whole life was with that man, the humiliation he gave me publically, the lying, never met such an ass my entire life,,then now no knowledge i was merely a puppet waiting around? be glad you only have hiccups
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April 27, 2011 at 9:27 PM
i can stand before God and let him know, as he already does this was the most painful, humiliating and hurting man I ever met my whole life..a real frigging trip and treat..
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April 27, 2011 at 9:26 PM
followed me around and stuck to my very ass pumping words into my soul but i was only bits of light and no knowledge..a lying lecher that leads others on..most critical amount of hurt i have had to endure my whole frigging life..good for you that you only have hiccups..while the others pick up the scraps of what remains
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April 27, 2011 at 9:24 PM
count yourself fortunate only hiccups, i was lead on for nine months by a lecher i thought wanted knowledge nothing but a lying lecher that leads others on, only wanted a bit of light, while writing words they never met..stuck to my ass and suck the life right out of me, be glad for hiccups only
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April 27, 2011 at 9:14 PM
for me the most critical hurt i ever endured my whole life, i can say this to God himself was last july and for the last nine months, count yourself lucky you only have hiccups..most painful and critically hurt thing i have had..knowledge never wanted, but sucked the life right out of me,literally
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April 27, 2011 at 9:10 PM
Barbara, yes they do.. annoying nevertheless..Enjoyed your haiku ;-) :-)take care..p.d.
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