Haiku - Heaven, Hell, Or Purgatory, Your Choice

Sometimes I just like
to have fun with syllables
and call it haiku

Seventeen is big
number in my family
stuff happens that age

Epilepsy for
one, then there's eye surgery
two don't forget how

cutting is frowned on.
Some things you must avoid in
order to follow

rules.  So go figure
punctuation is option
no matter who nots.

Sometimes I just like
to say what I think and get
feedback from kindreds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Treetop Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 9:26 PM
Your poems are very interesting Nancy, so so different to mine, but so filled with living and being self!
A   Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 11:00 PM
HEAVEN,,, I CALL IT..P.D.
Buchel Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Love how your mind works! Specially there 'tween 4th and 5th.... that ol' thinkin' outside the box .... love when that happens!
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