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Haiku Heatwave

five days in a row hot and steamy weather i am not yelling

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Lyric Man

Date: 7/4/2018 12:53:00 AM

Hi Charlie, enjoyed your Haiku!

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 7/4/2018 5:24:00 AM

Thank you Man! For reading a=nd enjoying.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/3/2018 12:17:00 PM

Just sweating...nice one...

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 7/3/2018 1:10:00 PM

Hi Arturo! Thanks for reading. Don`t know where you`re at but Vermont`s been hell.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/3/2018 12:14:00 PM

Giggles ;) xomo

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 7/3/2018 2:45:00 PM

Yes I was trying my best to be angst and funny. I`m in Vt. Maureen and we have at least 2 more days of this, 95-100 degrees and very humid…Sorry!... Was I yelling?

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/3/2018 1:17:00 PM

You're being funny right, it's a heatwave here. As a bike courier rainy days saw endless "stay dry" wishes to which I'd retort, "stay warm, dry is not an attainable goal" ;p

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 7/3/2018 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Maureen. I so value your feedback. Stay warm!…Hee! Hee!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/3/2018 10:11:00 AM

Me either. I want summer to linger as long or longer than winter's overstay. I found your haiku clever and catching. All the best ... CayCay

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 7/3/2018 11:13:00 AM

Thanks for reading and liking CayCay! I appreciate your feedback... Happy poeming to you.