Haiku Happening

haiku happening.
noon sun sizzles-pavement hot-
carp splashing in lake.
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Horn Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:03 PM
like looking at lake, while water want to be in, when we splash around.
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 8:48 AM
- A great haiku, Allen - Haiku is one of my favorite forms :) - // Sun :)
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