Haiku - Good Day

Beauty in brevity! Lovely Haiku! You are a pleasure to read! hugs, Kris

So simple but so lovely and beautiful. Great write my friend. Thanks ....Ravindra.....Hai Au Chu

A wonderful poem, enjoyed the great view of the perfect day coming to a close,..p.d.

This is lovely, Hai. I think I have visited your poetry before? Anyway, nice to see you here .LUv, Andrea

I wanted to let you know..I feel I stink at this haiku form...I'm trying to work on it! I didn't even know I wasn't supposed to punctuate or capitalize or name them until a few days ago. SO, I'd appreciate all the help I can get...on my haiku it was a stinky pond in spring but a pristine skating pond in winter..I was trying to do juxtaposition & show not tell...did I?

Your haiku offers good personification. Good work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Very descriptive Haiku, Hai Au Chu. My Haiku about the 5pointed red thing is a sweet gum tree that turns sometimes red a very dark burgundy red or sometimes yellow in the fall. It has these little round ball that contain the trees seeds and squirrels do eat them. It is suppose to tell about fall or autumn without saying the words fall or autumn. There is a contest. I am just writing some to try out . Keep writing. Sara

I don't blame the clouds at all... -Alley

the sun is yelling to be still be out, poor clouds must absorb his cries till the lady moon cools them. Very nice images, o ja! answer my poetry soupers question!

This is awesome...clouds reflect anger of the setting sun..wow...well done.

I can see the sun. Nicely penned. Keep writing. Sar