Haiku God Shepherd

you just can't sit there
                                  shepherds say lambs gathering
                                        that hard rock blisters
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Nicely penned haiku! I really enjoyed it my dear friend Rajat. Have a very nice day! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.
Newman Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Nicely Put Miken
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Michael. God bless. RAJAT
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Rajat, the hard rock does blisters those hands and feet. :) blessings to you and yours eve
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:54 AM
Yes Eve dear. God does not want our body blisters. So he comes in the guise of shepherds to give us protection. Love. God bless. RAJAT
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:04 PM
this is sure interesting. I can imagine them sitting there on that hard rock!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Andrea darling God takes care of us always anywhere all the time. He guides us as a shepherd does.
Gifford Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 1:01 PM
God shepherds us. How true! Rajat, He also is our good shepherd, is He not? He looks after us, His lambs. Without God's guidance we are lost. Blessings, Darlene
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Yes Darlene, exactly that I did want to say.Love. God bless. XXXX rajat
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