Haiku God Shadow

a castle of calm
                            Monk sits straight spine eyes at rest
                                        shadow of god falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:08 PM
It seems very Buddah to me!!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Yes Buddha like exactly. Monk is in meditation and feels god inside.Love XXXX rajat
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