Haiku Gate

A buffeting  wind

gate grunts on rusty hinges ~

old man snores away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Grunts and snores . . . sounds of fall afternoon -- maybe too much turkey!!
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November 30, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Thanks David .ps Did you pick up on the change In "Lace " poem we spoke about.? Don't eat too much ! miken
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