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Haiku From My Window

faintly sparkled drifts
   lonely bird presents his song....
       in the silver dusk



By Deb Wilson

*for contest "Haiku From Your Window"
sponsored by Michael Falotico

Copyright © Deb Wilson | Year Posted 2011

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February 20, 2011 at 2:36 PM

You paint a picture with words in this one. Good use of imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

February 7, 2011 at 5:48 PM

beautiful scenario and the reader is there!great job .should be a winner

Carrie Richards

February 7, 2011 at 8:01 AM

such a lovely winter scene......I hope you have a nice fire to keep you warm! :)

February 7, 2011 at 1:59 AM

Nice picture you have drawn here Deb!Goodluck in the contest.

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