Haiku Freight

Freight train clattered by

over a tree lined viaduct  ~

golden oriole sings .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 7:00 AM
Vivid and beautiful image! Nicely done! Always, Laura
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 1:58 PM
lovely imagery Mike:-) hugs jan xxx
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