Haiku Four

Bottle of Irish
Abandoned by bartender
Emptied so he thought
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 4, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Abdulhafeez, AWESOME............. LOVE* SKAT
Hicks Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:29 AM
... the bartender seems to becoming delirious from the alcohol... he he. Andrea's right... it's like a compacted story.
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 12:40 AM
I enjoyed this one. LIke a small story captured in these three lines.
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June 20, 2013 at 12:46 PM
Thanks.
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