Haiku Eating

Starlings squabbling noise

crumbs of bread falling from beaks ~

gummy old man eats.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Nice poem. Excellent share and you gave me an inspiring read. Thanks for blessing us with your creativity.
Newman Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting Funom .Appreciated your interest Miken
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 11:41 AM
well penned haiku:-) Hugs Jan x
Newman Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Thanks for your time and comment Miken
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