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salty/tang-taste/smell
monsoon- season
shriek --hearing
Whip/rough-touch

Cuckoo/ May- season
calls- hearing
piney-smell
fragile- touch

Haiku Double


salty tang...
monsoons shriek and whip
rough seas 


cuckoo calls
from piney woods...
fragile May






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Copyright © Margaret Foster | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Destroyer A

November 21, 2012 at 9:03 PM

Margaret,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

November 28, 2011 at 3:33 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 28, 2011 at 10:48 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

November 26, 2011 at 12:09 PM

Margaret, congrats on your win, excellent..David

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 26, 2011 at 11:31 AM

Super congrats on your win, Margaret :) I could definitely imagine both so well, especially the first one-- really enjoyed your haiku :)

November 26, 2011 at 8:18 AM

Beautiful haiku here Marg!Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

November 25, 2011 at 11:42 PM

yes yes, it just had to be a winner. Congratulations, marg!

Connie Marcum Wong

November 25, 2011 at 4:43 PM

A great win with these two gems....my fav was the second one. Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Thank you for your kind comments Margaret. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2011 at 3:19 PM

I like this, Marg. I especially like the second one. Guess you didn't do winter animal yet!

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2011 at 11:12 PM

Marg.I think you really captured the essence of what he was looking for . it's for the two haiku contest, right? WAY to do it.

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2011 at 10:50 PM

Love your haikus......Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA

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