salty/tang-taste/smellmonsoon- seasonshriek --hearingWhip/rough-touchCuckoo/ May- seasoncalls- hearingpiney-smellfragile- touch
salty tang... monsoons shriek and whip rough seas cuckoo calls from piney woods... fragile May see about poem
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