Haiku Double

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salty/tang-taste/smell
monsoon- season
shriek --hearing
Whip/rough-touch

Cuckoo/ May- season
calls- hearing
piney-smell
fragile- touch

salty tang... monsoons shriek and whip rough seas cuckoo calls from piney woods... fragile May
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:03:00 PM
Margaret,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/28/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 12:09:00 PM
Margaret, congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Date: 11/26/2011 11:31:00 AM
Super congrats on your win, Margaret :) I could definitely imagine both so well, especially the first one-- really enjoyed your haiku :)
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Date: 11/26/2011 8:18:00 AM
Beautiful haiku here Marg!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:42:00 PM
yes yes, it just had to be a winner. Congratulations, marg!
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Date: 11/25/2011 4:43:00 PM
A great win with these two gems....my fav was the second one. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Margaret. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 3:19:00 PM
I like this, Marg. I especially like the second one. Guess you didn't do winter animal yet!
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Date: 11/14/2011 11:12:00 PM
Marg.I think you really captured the essence of what he was looking for . it's for the two haiku contest, right? WAY to do it.
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Date: 11/13/2011 10:50:00 PM
Love your haikus......Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA
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