Haiku December 4

frothy wave's end run
naked bodies nestled hourglass
moon-ray on buttocks 












© rajat kanti chakrabarty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:25 PM
truly lovely piece rajat dear pal
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Thank you liam. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Much much love. God bless. rajat
Meade Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Ah, the last breath makes a frothy wave upon the lips, in death we are naked and our bodies become celestial like shapes . . . in the dark the moon shines on. all the best dear lovely friend
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:11 AM
David, great. What an explanation my dear! I am so happy.Brilliant.Love. God blessXXX rajat
Nunez Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:37 AM
I see that your humor is carried over to haiku...always funny, funnyman. Laughingly yours, Kim Patrice :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:52 AM
O great Kim, just see these bodies may be dead bodies.Not so funny. Amigo gracius...rajat
Nance Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:22 AM
:) Nice :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Thanks Cas XXX rajat
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