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haiku december 4

frothy wave's end run naked bodies nestled hourglass moon-ray on buttocks © rajat kanti chakrabarty

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Date: 12/4/2014 8:25:00 PM
truly lovely piece rajat dear pal
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RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
Date: 12/13/2014 9:15:00 AM
Thank you liam. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Much much love. God bless. rajat
Date: 12/4/2014 8:06:00 AM
Ah, the last breath makes a frothy wave upon the lips, in death we are naked and our bodies become celestial like shapes . . . in the dark the moon shines on. all the best dear lovely friend
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RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
Date: 12/4/2014 8:11:00 AM
David, great. What an explanation my dear! I am so happy.Brilliant.Love. God blessXXX rajat
Date: 12/4/2014 7:37:00 AM
I see that your humor is carried over to haiku...always funny, funnyman. Laughingly yours, Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:52:00 AM
O great Kim, just see these bodies may be dead bodies.Not so funny. Amigo gracius...rajat
Date: 12/4/2014 7:22:00 AM
:) Nice :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Cas XXX rajat