Haiku Dandelion

dandelions whine
                         and complain im unkind
                         i cut their heads off
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Lol! Congratulations on your win. :)
Knowlton Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you Susan for reading and your response. Appreciate the feedback.
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Knowlton Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thank you for reading and responding Eve…Happy poeming to you.
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Yikes! And they just keep coming back, don't they? :) Congratulations on your win, Charlie.
Knowlton Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Mark, for reading and responding to my poem.
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 11:49 PM
LOL funny, Charlie. Congrats on your win.
Knowlton Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Thank you and congrats to you as well.
Marine Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 4:03 PM
: D Now I'll never be able to look at a dandelion the same way again...I'll be laughing too much.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 5:41 PM
So violent! But I like it, Charlie. LOL -
Knowlton Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 5:52 PM
If you don`t chop the heads off how can you mount them to the wall?
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