Haiku Cranes

Stately red crowned cranes

prancing in the snowy field ~

my tallest sister.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Excellent haiku Michael! Truly enjoyed it. A 7 for me! Love and light! :) xxxx D.
Newman Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Thanks Dorian for your time and comment,appreciated Miken
Meade Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Nice, does she liked to be called a crane?
Newman Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thanks David. Only when she needs lifting ! Miken
Gifford Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 7:38 AM
very creative! Loved your crane/sister connection. A 7 from me.
Newman Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Thank you.Your time and comment is appreciated . Miken
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