Haiku Contest: Deluge of Colors.

Through virgin blue glass,
alabaster wraiths admire
jade jewels of luster.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 25, 2009 at 5:06 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. The title is fitting for the poem. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a nice day! Karen
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July 25, 2009 at 1:22 PM
I love the images in this fine haiku! Gerard!! jimbo
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July 13, 2009 at 12:05 AM
Best wishes with this one Gerard. thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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July 12, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Wow..another winning haiku....this contest gets harder and harder for Raul....glad I don't have to decide!! ~ Carrie
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