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Haiku Clandestine

heavy hidden moon
                                 sigh moans pleasures of the night  
                                             cruel kisses bleed 










© rajat kanti chakrabarty
revised org 8/12/2014

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Sara Kendrick

December 14, 2014 at 4:33 PM

Was the moon hidden by clouds?..Interesting work that you have penned..Created many vivid pictures in just a few words...Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 17, 2014 at 11:22 AM

Sara this is an erotic haiku where moon has a passive role . I have written some erotic haiku where moon is a male partner or lover( active role). Here moon feels betrayed when his partner is passionately in love with her paramour.Moon is basically shy. He watches the act of love-making from behind the curtain of cloud hidden and heavy-hearted. Love Sara