Haiku Brook

Brook 

Babbling brook
Flows down 
Calm

In sunshine 
Ripples shine
Clear

Pebbles glow
As gems
Low

Butterflies 
Birds chirp
Close

Wild soft ferns
Sways side
Flux

5/10/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Great string of Haiku, Purbasha, congratulations on your win. <3
Roy Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Thank you!
Messina Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 6:30 PM
This is excellent Purbasha, a great take on this new form of poetry. Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for entering...Charlie
Roy Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much.My efforts are getting recognized. Really happy for that.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 4:24 PM
such lovely imagery Purbasha, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roy Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Lovely, Purbasha. Congrats on your top win.
Roy Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so very much
Andresen Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 11:46 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Purbasha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roy Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Thank you
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 5:53 AM
I feel like I have just traveled dreamily down a pretty brook.
Roy Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 6:23 AM
I am so thankful for the appreciation.
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