Haiku Bpf

berry juice on lips
produce sliding off two shelves
freedom to impress

8/7/2018
Haiku BPF (Harry Horseman)
First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 6:39 AM
Many congrats on your win Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 2:56 AM
And you have definitely impressed, Kim!! Congratulations on placing first!! Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Toney Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Kim, congratulations on your first place win with such an expressive haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Mark!
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Line! Exciting!
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Kim , congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Thanks a bunch, Eve!
Horsman Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:06 AM
This just blew me away Kim, congratulations on your 1st place in my contest..Harry
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Thank you so much, Harry! <3 Kim
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 7:27 AM
lovely lines Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs...Kim
Blown Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 5:55 AM
gym-nastics.....no spills
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