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haiku blues

rising from behind clouds suave like cotton candy water drops like ice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 5/26/2015 5:30:00 PM
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:07:00 PM
Yikes. Cold water a good contrast with cotton candy clouds.
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Date: 12/25/2013 7:09:00 PM
mmm kind of makes me want to take a lesson, in cotton candy making.. I see how one can fall into a barrel of blues, once filling up with all the sweet things in life... Enjoyed.. LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2013 9:39:00 PM
Nice images, AiyaH, Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/24/2013 7:35:00 AM
A very awe poem!!! Merry christmas to you, Bell .Just drop by to greet and wish you all a very merry christmas and a bountiful New Year!!! ..from your friendly poet,AiyaH ^_^
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