Haiku Blues

rising from behind
clouds suave like cotton candy
water drops like ice
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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:30 PM
sweet
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Yikes. Cold water a good contrast with cotton candy clouds.
A   Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 7:09 PM
mmm kind of makes me want to take a lesson, in cotton candy making.. I see how one can fall into a barrel of blues, once filling up with all the sweet things in life... Enjoyed.. LINDA
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Nice images, AiyaH, Merry Christmas
Torres Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 7:35 AM
A very awe poem!!! Merry christmas to you, Bell .Just drop by to greet and wish you all a very merry christmas and a bountiful New Year!!! ..from your friendly poet,AiyaH ^_^
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