Haiku Blues

rising from behind clouds suave like cotton candy water drops like ice

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:30:00 PM

sweet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2014 7:07:00 PM

Yikes. Cold water a good contrast with cotton candy clouds.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2013 7:09:00 PM

mmm kind of makes me want to take a lesson, in cotton candy making.. I see how one can fall into a barrel of blues, once filling up with all the sweet things in life... Enjoyed.. LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/24/2013 9:39:00 PM

Nice images, AiyaH, Merry Christmas

Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/24/2013 7:35:00 AM

A very awe poem!!! Merry christmas to you, Bell .Just drop by to greet and wish you all a very merry christmas and a bountiful New Year!!! ..from your friendly poet,AiyaH ^_^