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Haiku Bird Song

wren are you going to shut up

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/27/2020 4:33:00 PM

Reminds me of the Grackle my father shot because it irritated my mother so she took it out on my dad.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2020 8:47:00 PM

Yes, wrens can be annoying... LOL. Thanks, Charlie. ~ Gershon9JK

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/21/2020 3:30:00 AM

Happy to make you laugh Gershon. Thank you for reading and the feedback.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/19/2020 4:12:00 PM

LOL!!!

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/20/2020 10:01:00 AM

Glad to make you laugh Maureen…Like the haiku said to the senryu. "For just this once, could you be serious?"

Jessica Renee Dawson

Date: 2/19/2020 1:54:00 PM

This is genius and hilarious!

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/19/2020 2:00:00 PM

I see you also like the Haiku/Senryu poems as well. Going to check out your work.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/19/2020 1:58:00 PM

Thank you JR, for reading and liking my poem. I appreciate the feedback as well.